The Academic Conference (Day 1)
Sep 10, 2015 20:25
Today, I participated in the academic conference from this morning.
There were many technical presentations, and I couldn't understand well some of them.
However, there were also many interesting presentations, which elevated my motivation.
Also, people in Osaka were very friendly and kind.
In addition, I felt their Kansai accent were cool and cute.
I'd like to come to this city again someday.
Before thinking such a thing, I have to prepare for tomorrow's my presentation right now.
There were many technical presentations, and I couldn't understand well some of them.
However, there were also many interesting presentations, which elevated my motivation.
Also, people in Osaka were very friendly and kind.
In addition, I felt their Kansai accent were cool and cute.
I'd like to come to this city again someday.
Before thinking such a thing, I have to prepare for tomorrow's my presentation right now.
学会1日目
今日は朝から学会に参加してきました。
専門性の高い話が多く、しっかりと理解できないものもありました。
しかし面白い話も多く、とてもモチベーションが刺激されました。
また、大阪の人たちはとてもフレンドリーで、優しかったです。
そして関西弁がかっこよくて、かわいく感じました。
いつかまたこの町に来たいです。
そんなことを考えるよりも、今は明日の発表の準備をしなければなりません。
今日は朝から学会に参加してきました。
専門性の高い話が多く、しっかりと理解できないものもありました。
しかし面白い話も多く、とてもモチベーションが刺激されました。
また、大阪の人たちはとてもフレンドリーで、優しかったです。
そして関西弁がかっこよくて、かわいく感じました。
いつかまたこの町に来たいです。
そんなことを考えるよりも、今は明日の発表の準備をしなければなりません。
No. 1 デクラン's correction
- Today, I participated in the academic conference from this morning.
- Today, since this morning, I've been participating in the academic conference from this morning.
- There were many technical presentations, and I couldn't understand well some of them.
- There were many technical presentations, and I couldn't understand well some of them very well.
- However, there were also many interesting presentations, which elevated my motivation.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- Also, people in Osaka were very friendly and kind.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- In addition, I felt their Kansai accent were cool and cute.
- In addition, I felt their Kansai accents were cool and cute.
- I'd like to come to this city again someday.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- Before thinking such a thing, I have to prepare for tomorrow's my presentation right now.
- Before thinking such a thing, I have to prepare for my presentation tomorrow my presentation right now.
What's your presentation about tomorrow? Anything cool?
kanotown
Thank you very much for correcting my post! :D
My presentation is about a new reconstruction algorithm on X-ray CT. It's trivial, haha.
Thank you very much for correcting my post! :D
My presentation is about a new reconstruction algorithm on X-ray CT. It's trivial, haha.
No. 2 outdoors's correction
- In addition, I felt their Kansai accent were cool and cute.
- In addition, I felt their Kansai accent were was cool and cute.
- Before thinking such a thing, I have to prepare for tomorrow's my presentation right now.
- Before thinking about that such a thing, I have to prepare for 's my presentation tomorrow right now.
kanotown
Thank you very much for your corrections again! :)
Thank you very much for your corrections again! :)